By Charles Robert Lindholm
I only meant to look
To admire the design
The wonder of the shape
And the beauty of the line
The form, the flow, the symmetry
The elegance and grace
But the light upon the surface
Moved me from my place
It seemed just like a fantasy
A dream that wasn’t real
Compelled I had to touch it
To see how it would feel
Cold as ice, smooth as glass
But I didn’t pull away
Frozen to the bond I made
I knew I’d want to stay
I felt I held it firmly
But I began to see
The thing that I was feeling
Had a grip on me
I never thought the bond would break
That’s when I felt a drip
The beginning of the end and then
The hold began to slip
It never really lasted long
And the frozen bond was broken
The joy of touching ended
And the love to go unspoken
Copyright © 2017 Charles Robert Lindholm – All Rights Reserved
Sir. Chuck this is beautifully penned, vivid creative flow.
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Ohhh, Yonnie!! I can’t tell you how happy I am to see that you are going through my 2017 Archives!! You have made my week, My Dear!!!
xoxo 💖💖🌹
Chuck
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You are welcome. Thanks so much, have a wonderful weekend as well!🤗
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Thank you so much, Yonnie for being such a wonderful follower/reader!! I’m so blessed to have you supporting my words and blog!! You made my week!!
xoxo 💖🌹😊
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This is beyond words, Chuck. Using ice and its melting in your hands to symbolize the love lost and the bond you wished would last forever. Really well done!
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Ohhh, Thank you Brandi!!! I so love your comment and describing this poem. You made my day, Dear Brandi!! Thanks for rummaging in my archive!!
xoxoxo
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I am glad I could make your day, Chuck! I thank you for inviting me to explore your beautiful poems, my dear friend. Hope you have a beautiful week ahead!
xoxoxo
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Happy you like my suggestions! You may find some others waiting for you in my archives! LOL!
xoxoxo
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Wow, absolutely breathtaking!👏👏
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Ohhh, Thank you so much, My Dear! High praise coming from you!! I so appreciate your sharing your posts. Bravo!!! We all so appreciate you!!!
xoxoxo
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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A good poem, and effective expression of a bond that feels lost or broken.
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Thanks so much! I loved the description as in an ice sculpture and the way a frozen bond can seem like it can never be broken but lo’ and behold – poof, it’s gone! Thanks for catching up on me!!!
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My pleasure.
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Your poems are really beautiful. Loved reading them. Keep writing 🙂
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Oh, thank you so much! Your words are so appreciated! I am so happy that You have been reading the others too! Sometimes they get lonely. They really love visitors!!! I will do my best to follow Your wishes!! So wonderful to chat with You!!
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Visiting your blog: my pleasure. I like poems that are deep and easy to relate/ understand. And your blog contains plenty of them 🙂
Good to chat with you too 🙂
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Oh, aren’t You the sweet One! Thanks, I try! I love banter and chit-chat so be forewarned!! Ha!
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😊😊 hahahaha.. did I mention that I don’t like them. 😉 🙂
All ready , bring it on 😀 😀
You’re welcome
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Oh, really! Don’t be tempting me?
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