By Jeanne Marie And Charles Robert Lindholm
I Can Hear The Silence
As It Whispers . . .
What Could Have Been
Will Never Be.
As Bittersweet Memories
Replay In My Mind
And My Soul Knows Why
As My Heart Cries
In The Darkness
Of The Night
And Tears Fall
Upon My Pillow
Copyright Β© 2020 Jeanne Marie And Charles Robert Lindholm – The Reluctant Poet
All Rights Reserved – 05-21-2020 – Noon
Inspired by Jeanne Marie’s poem – Silence Whispers
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So happy you enjoyed this! Thanks for the view and kind comment!
Chuck
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You are very welcome Chuck! Have a wholesome week!ππ«
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The pain penned awesomely. Beautiful writing both of you πππππ
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Thank you so much, Dear K, for your sweet comment! I’m so happy you enjoyed it!! Jeanne’s words were magical!!
xoxo
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My pleasure always π
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So Appreciated!
xoxo
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Lovely combination. Reads a bit like a Renga, might be an idea for a future combined effort.
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Thank you so much for your very kind comment and suggestion – I will have to go learn what that is – Ha! I’m hoping I can tempt and entice Jeanne into writing with me again!!! I’ll use you as one who thinks we should!! Thanks for that!
Chuck
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Reblogged this on Art, Photography and Poetry.
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Thank you so much Goff, for sharing this with your followers!! I am so honored!! I’m in reblogging withdrawals!! Ha
Chuck
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Great collaborative piece. Really enjoyed the read. Have a great day.
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Thanks so much, Goff! Happy you enjoyed it!! Writing with Jeanne was a dream!!
Hope you had a great weekend!!
Chuck
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Quiet! Hope you had a great weekend too. Happy Day.
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Thank you!
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My pleasure. Have a great day.
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This is a beautiful collaboration, Chuck and Jeanne. Well done!
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Ahhh, Thank you so much Dear E!! So appreciate your sweet comment for Jeanne and Me!! This was so magically wonderful!! Jeanne’s words reached out to my heart and it came together like it was always meant to be – Awesome feeling!! I have been truly blessed to have been able to write with Jeanne!!! She is a great writer!!! I’m hoping for More and that I can tempt and entice her to do another?
Chuck
xoxo
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Thank you!
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Lovely and so relatable! Nicely done, you two!
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Ohh, Susi!! Thank you so much for your kind and sweet comment for us! Happy it reached out to You! Collaborations are fun????
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A beautiful collaboration – the silent whispers and tears on the pillow. The could have been a… Gentle and soulful.
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Ahhhhh, Thank you, Rachel!! So appreciate your sweet comment! This is an example of a duet between Jeanne’s stanza at the beginning and mine after that – wouldn’t normally reveal that but since it’s You and it’s a good example of a duet (lines added to an existing piece to make a new one) I wanted you to know. Her lines just spoke to my heart and life experience and she was so sweet to allow this duet to go forward! So nice to see You! I so appreciate you spending time on my blog and with my words! So happy you find it worthy of your precious time!!!!
Chuck
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If only… painfully real and perfectly described…
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Thank you so much! It was such an honor and delight to work with Jeanne and to have my words intertwined with hers!! Happy you enjoyed this and glad it spoke to your heart! We thought this was a good match to the feelings we all have experienced with choices and time!!
Chuck
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Thank you for the experience, Chuck. Honored to have awakened your muse and to publish these thoughts together.
Nicely done.π
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I so loved this, Jeanne! Your words were My Muse! It was a real joy sharing this together!! Your words were masterful. I think this calls for MORE?
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We can try, see if anything develops.
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Yes, I would love to try More, if you are willing?? Off to a great start! So, Would you like to do a stanza and send it to me or maybe a couple? I will let you lead? I’m not a good dancer? LOL!
Chuck
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Just sent you an email with a start from me!! I hope you like it. We can have some fun???
Chuck
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Yes!
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So very Happy to hear your response was – Yes!!!! I think we can do some really great writing!! See if you can tease yourself into 3 or 4 lines on a new topic that moves you and send them to me!! Oh, Maybe you can share 3 or 4 topics/subject areas that move you??? For reference and as seeds of inspiration?
Chuck
xoxo
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Reblogged this on Women Who Think Too Much by Jeanne Marie and commented:
A duet…
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Oh, My Dear Jeanne!! I cannot begin to describe to you how thrilled I am to have this piece of ours come together and posted!! YOU are an angel for trusting me with your precious words!! Your words were so powerful, intimate and magical that my heart could not keep from responding even as I read your words. It really captured my experience and touched me.
Thanks again, My Dear for the honor and privilege of writing with You!! You always find a way to make my month!!! Now you are a member of my Inspirators Club – those who have written with me or inspired me to write from something they have written! Welcome to the Club, My Dear!
Hope you are as happy as I am!! Mmm!
Chuck
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Thrilled to be a member. You’re welcome, my pleasureπ
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Can we do more of these? I do love MORE!! Mmm!
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Sure…
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