THE BACKSIDE OF THE NIGHT
By Charles Robert Lindholm
2-14-2017 at 5:00 a.m. Valentine’s Day
The Backside of the Night
the tail end of Darkness
finally rolling around
the silence of stillness
a still life photo
of a sleeping little town
No hub-bub commotion
no endless motion
in the Backside of the Night
Yesterday’s ending
Tomorrow is coming
with the glimmer
of morning light
© 2017 Charles Robert Lindholm – All Rights Reserved
Inspired by – S Francis on WordPress.com
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elegantly simple evocation of that sweet peaceful tween-ness – “silence of stillness” = lovely
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Thanks so much for your comment! I loved “that sweet peaceful tween-ness” so great! I am going to have to deposit this into my Word Bank in your account! Great phrase!! Thanks, Paul
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*smile*
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Thanks for the read and comment!!
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Is it this?
Soo wonderful❄😍
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Thanks! Love your emojis!
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😁Everyone loves me &my emojis. Thank you so much😁😍. Love yaa😇😘😍
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And why would anyone not Love You or your Emoji’s? Thanks so much for spending time with me.
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I love the clarity in your words. The image is certainly one which certainly calls for expansion into verse which you have done so effectively, Charles..
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Thanks so much for you insights! I really loved trying to capture the moment and painting the scene with word! Thanks for taking the time to comment.
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Sailorpoet – Thanks so much for the Pingbacks!
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Thanks for stopping by and your kind comment.
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Beautiful and to the point.
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I miss rising earlier in the day. Although I recently tempered my night owl tendencies, my son continues to stay up way too late! At least we’re doing better than before, though. On some days, I don’t start writing until after dinner because of other responsibilities. That makes for a late night. Thank you for your thoughtful response to my comment. I long to move back to a small town. I’m working on it!
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Hope you are able to change things up the way your want. They say, if you can do something 21 days in a row it becomes a habit??? Smaller towns have their advantages! Baby steps!
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Oh, Laura! That means so much to me! You are so kind. I’m so glad that you enjoyed it and felt it. I love that time of day, now, as opposed to being a night owl in my younger days. You can almost feel the mist in that photo?? I’m so glad you used the word “Painted” in your comment. That is the way I try and write, Painting with words.
Love your blog. So glad you are back!!!
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Charles, you painted such a vivid image with your words. That is truly beautiful. I love quiet.
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Reblogged this on sailorpoet and commented:
May we start a meme… or collect a chapbook of poems inspired by the backside of night
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Not sure what those are exactly but hey? Sounds like fun. What do I have to do?
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Very happy to read such a fine example of the backside of night, may it become a meme. 🙂
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So grateful for your inspiration and wordsmithing that brought this into being! Thanks so much for your kind words!
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You have captured the essence and stillness of the “backside of the night” well in this poem Charles. You feel the eeriness.
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Appreciate your comment so much!! I thought the photo and the poem was a good blend. Glad the feeling came through. Again you get an assist by hosting such a great topic. Thanks so much for stirring up the inspiration!!!
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I would suggest your inspiration comes from within Charles, but if I can help in any small way I am pleased 🙂
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